Elena,+Mary+&+Lina's+group+e-books

Planning; Description of Long John Silver
 * (By.Lina, Mary, and Elena)

Silver is a.....

Selfish Sneaky Confident Greedy Charming Unfaithful

This story is from Silver’s point of View characters in this story.

Silver Sliver’s wife Maya Silver’s brother, Mark Silver Pirates in the island

The short cut of the story .......... 1.Long John Silver sails and meets with his missus ship, load the gold. 2.They sails to their discovered island where they have the money. 3.Long John retires from pirate life to stay forever on the beautiful island with his family. 4.After a few years, on the island Silver finds a group of pirates and decides to go looking for, treasures, life an ground was not meant for him.

Things we did: Find picture of an island .(Mary) Write planning on the Wiki account.(Lina) Create starting of the story.(Elena)

Reflection on WALT (Elena): WALT:**

**2. Managing time effectively on the project.**
===**We used our time wisely without wasting it, in the end we came up with wonderful presentations!!! Score (1-10) 8. We didn't waste time and stayed well on task. It took us a bit more than 2 weeks to finish our e-book.**===

**3. Composing a plot which expands our Characters personality and attributes.**
===**Long John Silver, our character is more or less the same as in the book though he is not so greedy. we made new characters ,Maya (Long John's wife), Mark (Long John's brother) and pirates on the island .Score (1-10) 7. We composed a good plot. We divided the story in 3 parts (beginning, middle, end), and we each wrote one.**===

 **Mr.Pope's individualized WALT for me was : to vary the sentence structure with words like as, although, if, is.**

 * Reflection on WALT (Mary) :**

**1. making a truly collaborative e-book which reflects the talents and energy of everyone in the group.**

 * In our group, we helped each other to correcting some problems and helped writing better. Alicia helped us correcting stuffs, and she helped us doing things. Elena wrote the first part of the story and after she finished it, she helped us rewriting and doing story board. Lina wrote the last part and helped us doing things. I also did same job with Lina, but I wrote the middle part of the story.We had a wonderful teamwork. [score - 7]**

**2. Managing time effectively on the project.**

 * We've used our time really well. We've done those works just at time and we always finished clearly. We were fast and having good story. Our story board, the pictures were quite messy, but it shows our story really well.We checked our story again and again. We had many time but we did it really quick and clear.We used our time really well. [score - 8.5]**

**3. Composing a plot which expands our Characters personality and attributes.**

 * Our main character is Long John Silver. He's not really pirate in our story.He wanted to live rest of his life just like a gentle man but he can't leave the ocean blue, so he became pirate again at last.We named his wife, Maya. She was as pirate but she also go to Barracuda Island with Long John Silver and his brother Mark. Mark has same personality just like Long John Silver like Elena said. I think we described our characters really well. [score - 8.5]**

**4. Individualized WALTS.**

 * At first, we made a pirate poster. I helped them writing and coloring, then we started writing our story. Elena wrote the chapter 1, I wrote chapter 2 and Lina wrote chapter 3. Elena wrote that Long John Silver, his wife Maya and Mark is going to Barracuda Island (Maya named the Island Barracuda Island), then I wrote a peaceful life in Barracuda Island, and then Lina wrote that Long John Silver being the pirate again. Our last job was using flash to put it on the Wikispaces. I think next time we can write some more details and put some more good pictures like Elena said. [score - 7.5]

Reflection on WALT (Lina):**

**1. making a truly collaborative e-book which reflects the talents and energy of everyone in the group.**

 * In our group, if we are not sure with something and don't know what to write in the story we help each other.

We had to manage the time because we have many things to do with pirates.**